overall its actually quite good, but a few minor things you want to keep an eye on.
her thumb, the way her chest appears, if shes wearing a sports bra then yeah this pose makes sense, but from the way she's drawn it looks like you were going for the at home look, so you might want to rethink the pose.
im guessing you were goiing for the straight long hair look, not a bed rendition, but a little more volume would make it look more natural.
one other thing i noticed is the angle at which her left arm comes into the... (
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