Hmmm.. At least you draw better than me lol.
Yeah, her shoulders abit high and as for her fringe, there's this part on top of her eye that makes it look like 2 horns/Lacus' hair clip. IMO, that part of the hair should just flow down.
Nice sketch if it's seen overall. Well, we need to improve by viewing other people's comments. No one can really criticize themselves, can they?
Just my two-cents. ^^ (
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